Persuasive Writer: I need to edit a personal letter regarding custody.

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I need a second set of eyes to help me finalize a letter to my child's new step-parent who has stepped in to protect my son's absent father. This letter needs to get her up to date in a way where she can not come back to me with excuses. It needs to be extremely strong and clear. I find I am allowing emotions to get in the way and it's becoming long and may lose it's effectiveness. I've submitted my voice notes into ChatGPT a few times but I need a human's input. Looking for someone with a strong persuasive writing style that can assist this letter in coming across strong and clear without emotion. I'm attaching the email she sent to me last night, as well as, the letter Ive drafted as response. She is questioning a twice a month visitation.

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